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While reading this I imagined I was back in Vegas circa 1978. It would have to had been around three in the morning. For some reason Redd Foxx is working the room. I've had as much to drink as him. And that's a good thing. He's gone on this rift about high-class blacks. Your story is his act that night.

Hey Samuel, you have some really great ideas for stories but your writing is like you just ramble along. Keep working at it and maybe get someone to help you along.