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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Awkward

You should consider using quotation marks. Dialogue makes a sorry much more readable and understandable instead of an awkward first person narration. Also, you don't capitalize blank and white as races; you already come across as racist given such a heavy emphasis on race in your stories. That capitalization only exacerbates the impression given.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
request to have him banned

Send a PM to Laurel on the forums. Also report his stories as spam etc.

Comentarista82Comentarista82over 8 years ago
Oxymoronic

"Muslim sister"? Your wanton ignorance stuns even the most uninformed, who would instantly recognize "sister" is American usage only, and does not carry over to the Muslim world in the way you assert.

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