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by samslam

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
great story...

Lovely stuff.

DanielOrmeDanielOrmeover 17 years ago
Great fantasy stuff

Not very likely to happen this way (I kept thinking that at the end Kat would tell Chris that she knew it was a ruse all along, but she went with it because she was hot for him, too), but great fantasy stuff! Love the descriptions of the beautiful black woman and of the sex.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
SOOOO HOOOT!!!!!!!

HOT HOT HOT WRITE MORE FOR THIS ONE

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Wonderful Story

I loved it. Sure wish this would happen to me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
VERY Hot !

One of the hottest and best stories I've ever read. I loved it. Let's have a follow up, with what they got up to before his wife returns.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good job!

I too thought this would end with her knowing it was all fake..but great nevertheless!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great job, got me wet!!!

A very similar experience happened to me at age 19.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Reminded me why I love the Nubian ladies...

Great job, Sam!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Outstanding!

This guy just lived out on of my fantasies! I'd love to have a young black woman with my cock buried in her black snapper. Another involves a girl og Asain desent.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
A Stunning Example of Erotic Literature!

I must say, the samples of samslam's work I have read thusfar have placed him amongst the very best erotic authors known to me. A truly outstanding effort!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

I actually came while reading this

Goddiva11Goddiva11almost 16 years ago
5 Stars for the con artist

I loved the details of this story. The lengths he went to to make his session credible, how he was able to control himself and let it all play out. Reading it was like foreplay when he finally got to screw her I felt a sexual release. Oh yeah I feel the sudden urge to have MY pictures taken!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Nice fantasy

Hot chocolate.

SerranoirSerranoirabout 15 years ago
Love !!!!

Very sexy,seductive and sweet... Makes may of us (black women)wonder..

RicanbanditRicanbanditover 14 years ago
Great story

Excellent tale, loved the way you developed the story line. the dialog was well thought out and viable. I would have loved to hear about her oral abilities, but other than that very sexy story. Well done

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Me To?

Boy, Did I ever get it up eading this story. Great job Sam. I think my cock is as large as it ever has been. My Wife is due home soon and she will get the benifit of this I'm quite sure. Ghe has as hot a pussy as I,ve ever seen and she loves to have ne eat her off. I think we will go at it all afternoon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Brilliant story, Samslam!

It's so refreshing to see intelligent respect displayed between two people! And your story-telling skills, and your command of the language, your ability to skillfully weave us into the emotions of the people involved, make your stories hotter than watching any video... Thank You for sharing your skill and time!

theognistheognisover 14 years ago
Excellent

Superb fantasy, and well told.

TRiiCHTRiiCHalmost 14 years ago
W0W

THiS WAS AMAZiNG, AWES0ME, W0NDERFUL, ER0TiC, SEXY, BEAUTiFULLY WRiTEN...iT WAS ALL THE GREAT WORDS EVER CREATED!!!!

EXTREMLY W0NDERFUL PEiCE!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Cute

Hot story!

BabyBoy100BabyBoy100over 13 years ago
WoW

Amazing writer...Its like you're inside my head..This is exactly the type of elaborate scheme I might come up with if I thought it'd work..lol

Keep it up

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Great

Simply Great and Loved Your Work.

Wow...

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 12 years ago
Let me mention two of my favourite ebony models

Tyra Lexx and Diamond Jackson are Goddesses.

Deepdive_1Deepdive_1over 11 years ago
Black may be best

Another great read well done kept me on the edge

till the end

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Boner every time

I've read this one three times and gotten a major boner every time. Hot, hot, story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Black BBW!! Loved it!

WOW written with such great description. The way he led Kat on was breath taken. The shoot, the clothes. Only thing missing if it would have been a real shoot is Toys. Especially when she had on the school.girl out fit. Either way i loved it.. Kind of makes me miss my White Man that had the big cock and great tongue....

oldnornryoldnornryover 10 years ago
Amazing story

You did great on the sexy descriptions. This is my second read and I realized that she was a virgin and there was no mention of taking here cherry. Aside from that I was intrigued both times.

SPEN STERLINGSPEN STERLINGover 10 years ago
nice

I didn't have this fantasy before, but I do now! well written!

msilkymsilkyalmost 10 years ago

Too freakin' hot and sexy! Such an elaborate ruse to con the young black beauty into the sack. Thanks Sam, great writing! 5 stars~

MeltnmoldMeltnmoldover 9 years ago

I have had a fantasy like this for long time and I did get a chance back in the 80's to play it out though not as good nor as elaborately as in this story. I was in San Francisco on business and she was a working girl but I took her out to dinner and then back to the hotel and we had a great night. I did have to pay her but it was worth it.

Where I live now there are a few girls that would be perfect, in fact I saw one in the doctor's office just last week when I took my mother in but I had no excuse, or the time, to talk to her.

I'll just keep looking.......

In the meantime, you keep writing stories like this, it was absolutely perfect.......

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Hot

That was an extremely good read! Please write more! I myself tend to be attracted to girls that are mixed races!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
My Wish

I wish you would continue this story, if only to describe how the two ladies interact with hubby the photographer. It could be a very sexy seduction.

SnakebitSnakebitabout 9 years ago
More

I enjoyed it like I do most of your writing but I would have liked to seen it develop further like your other work. I still gave it 5 stars, you have a wonderful writing style.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Awesome

I'm a white guy who loves black and mixed race girls. This was really erotic!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Bravo!

Now THAT was a good story. Well paced, your characters were believable, the scenario was great and your descriptions of everything were very vivid. Great Job!

37manxman37manxmanabout 8 years ago
Believable

Nice to see such a believable story with the development of the plot in progressive stages where nothing is too far fetched with his becoming naked & then offering options done in the manner of someone who cares about the girl & wanting to not risk their friendship at work by being too eager to get to fucking her & willing to stop short if need be & there being no needless never ending description of the sex. All made for a good enjoyable read with a pleasant ending. A second chapter developing the relationship & then working it into his marriage would have been interesting. Look forward to finding more of the same

37manxman37manxmanabout 8 years ago
Rated 5 stars .... Big thumb haha

Deserves 5 stars

HankWilliams1956HankWilliams1956over 7 years ago
5 starsand wish there were 10 stars.

I do love to have sex with a black woman. They are beautiful in my eyes as well as any other woman is. I wish I could find a black woman to be friends with, with benafits but they are few and far between around this part of the country. This story reicnights that want in me so much. Good job. I have no idea as to why I decided to read this story since I write and read incest/taboo stories, but I'm so glad that I did decide to read this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Hell, I love black women of any age. This was a super erotic story. One of my favorite fanisities. Only thing missing would be the wife, who couldnt keep her hands and mouth off her, either.

Loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

I can taste her juice.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

Absolute gem, I almost came

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Chapeau

This is the second story of yours that I've read, and both have been wonderful. I like the descriptions, the attention to detail, the rhythm. You do not exaggerate, thus making things possible, and plausible. The language you used was never crude, but sexy. Well handled.

I take my hat off before your mastery of the erotic short story genre. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wonderful

I also seek out young black women. Like your character they're very comfortable being the other woman and just enjoy the situation for what it is

ROCKY70ROCKY70over 4 years ago
Black women turn me on.!!!!!!^*!^*!^*!

Way back when, my sister had 2 black girlfriends.

They looked like, Diane Caroll and Halle Berry,

when my sister would have a sleep over, I always

was asked to, pick them up and drive them home.

THANKS

texastigertexastigerover 3 years ago
Blacked

This is one of the hottest white on black stories that I have ever read. WOW!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Delicious

So erotic! You’re an amazing storyteller.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Great premise.

Well structured. Well written -- like your stories in general.

Five stars.

anifreikanifreikover 2 years ago

Very nice to read an interracial story without the normal racial power politics in either direction.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Loved it!

maxsteelemaxsteeleover 2 years ago

This was great as all your stories are. Hopefully you start back writing new stories soon.

Maid540Maid540about 2 years ago

Incredibly well done!

kiwi857kiwi857about 2 years ago

Great story. Progressed well and 98% believable (lol). Love Black pussy but hard to find quality black in So OC CA.

blackknight314blackknight314almost 2 years ago

So much for being a Virgin. She must not have had much of a hymen. Maybe she has a BBC dildo to keep herself satisfied.

Otherwise; good job; thanks for sharing your work!

WhatsamatterUWhatsamatterUover 1 year ago

Outstanding, five-star!

Marklynda2Marklynda2over 1 year ago

The darker the berry the sweeter the juice. You hit on one of my favorite fantasies and added a few details to it, thanks. I definitely enjoy reading your stories. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great Story!

Loved how the adventure built to the "Climax" I didn't read all the comments but, she was not a virgin and that

is stated on the first page, Chris asks her if she is still a Virgin and Kat says, "NO" and Chris thinks to himself,

First hurdle cleared! We miss so much when we scan over the story instead of absorbing all the juicy details

it has to offer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I was in my 30s when one of my gfs told me about her having sex with a black man. She said it was the best sex she had . So after that I thought about what it would be like to be with a black guy . Months passed before I acted on it . I only been with 3 guys before this my ex husband my now bf and his friend. I when out with a few friends when out I met this black guy who is very hot . We talked and danced I rubbed up against him to feel his cock. We were dancing to a slow song I ask him if he would like to use that pole in his pants. We had wild sex that night at his place . I felt guilty for stepping out on my bf. I told him that I had sex with someone else . He was mad at first till I told him it was a black guy he said he want me to do it again but he want to be there to watch.

roveroneroveroneover 1 year ago

Have noticed in addition to nipples being black usually labia are too...

Glad she wasn't bald...doubly lucky Chris...! Just a likely as white women to have gone the completely shaved route these days

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Nice tale - as a young white guy, I worked in Africa for a couple of years & was lucky enough to have some awesome sex ( & relationships) with a number of young black girls. They are really sexy & uninhibited & also liked a lot of anal fingering & sometimes full anal.

Nothing like a young female black teen body....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Apsalutly awesom ,keep up the great work,

deepnydiverdeepnydiverabout 1 year ago

Fantastic fantasy story. Well done.

GayKatGayKatabout 1 year ago

Interesting, and 5-Stars!

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Hallo samslam!

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I can't tell you how many times I have heard, 😏 "no one has ever used their tongue on me like that before." ... From curious young college girls, but mostly from married straight women, always with the same complaint... my husband won't do that for me, he says it's too dirty, but his cock isn't too dirty for my mouth?!

I just shook my head smiling as she paid me, yeah, most men are selfish only thinking about himself, they haven't a fucking clue about what a Superior Woman needs sexually!... Not like one of us do! 😜

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The Black Queen and Gay Kat!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Funding Amazing!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Short but good. Although I've never seen a black woman's pubic hair that looked silky, usually looks wiry. Enjoyed the story. Anony Mous

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Great story. I also want to be with a black girl- very badly. I can't wait to write about it like you did.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Amazing. Last read it several years ago. Hope you keep writing.

MaydaypilotMaydaypilot28 days ago

Deviously, wonderfully erotic 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

AnonymousAnonymous21 days ago

Dam,,,,,, can this AUTHOR right,,,,,,,,im way past GETTING horny,,,,,,,

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