All Comments on 'Black World Order Ch. 01'

not worthy of any further comment

I find it funny that a black man needs a white women to feel complete.

A racist, trying to create more divide during an election year.

stomach racist garbage of this magnitude that advocates slavery. Offensive in the extreme.

Golly Wally, I was going t say something but everything that could be said, has been said!

Gee Beav: You're right I'm speechless!

When did this site become non fiction? Relax haters, it is a made up story, it is fiction, it isn't real. If it doesn't turn you on, why are you reading it???

The story is too confusing and didnt flow well. Great potential from the writer, just too many non essential characters. Keep writing.. ..you have it