by eeric
I really enjoy the world you are building here and especially enjoying the point of view from the white boys, its like I'm living in this world, I cant wait for the next chapter and hopefully many more after that
Loved this entry! Please write more!
The exchange between the two entertainment newscasters was jarring but no big deal.
Also loved the whole breastfeeding scene. I can't wait to see more.
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!! truly awesome!!! hope theres more Soon!!! great work all together!!!! rally great
There are a lot of spelling and grammatical mistakes in this story. You should really go through the forums and ask for some editing help before posting.