All Comments on 'Blackedmerica: A Love Story Ch. 03'

Need more! please continue this story i absolutely love it

I like this series you've started, but it could use a little more sex. Looking forward to reading more in this series though!

The lack of editing and grammar/punctuation checking hurts this story immensely.

Not enough sex or really any sexual nature. Too character driven. Not enough IR really. Weakest entry to an otherwise great series.

Love This One Hope it continues quickly!!!! Great details and story line

Chapter 1 was very exciting. The last 2 have been very descriptive and seemed to go in a lot of different directions. If your goal in writing these chapters is to establish a world that will be used for a long series, then I would say you are doing an amazing A+ job and I am desperate to find out where things go. But if I'm just evaluating each chapter independently, then Chapter 1 stands as the best submission on this account overall.