All Comments on 'Blackmail Baby'

Good read very intresting almost spellbinding

Shellden

When you want a job right, do it yourself. Little secrets and a happy family. Well written story and very creative and interesting. Thanks for sharing.

You have a very fertile imagination (pun intended), and the storyline promises lots of twists and turns still to come. Nicely done!

when is the next story coming

An excellent story. I enjoyed it and look forward to reading more of your work.

Excellent story. I loved every bit of it, and I'm hoping like hell that you'll add more to it soon -- with more of Ethan fucking Laura, to boot.

I'm glad you're writing again, and just like the others this story is one of the best

kinky,dirty and detailed...yess!! what next?

Absolutely loved this story. I am a big fan of the impregnation and Non consent fantasy stuff. One of the best stories I have read on here in a long time.

Maybe Ethan could sneek that big cock up her little pooper as well?

Can't wait for chapter 2.

where is part 2. its 3 months looking for sequell. cannot wait..

porque no hay actualizacion, esta historia no puede terminar aqui, tenemos que saber que pasa entre el triangulo amoroso, por favor escribir otros capitulos muy pronto, ana maria

Yeah dude we been waiting for like ages...wheres the rest? Dont leave us hangin!

por favor, actualizar como prometiste, estamos esperando ansioso estos nuevos capitulos muy pronto y con toda la ansiedad, am_sr

I love this story, I can't wait to read more! It was so hot!

Can't wait for more. Please write more of this story too soon.

AMAZING!!!!! what a yummy story!!:)

....for part 2!

You've GOT to finish this.

this story is amazingly hot!please please please continue it!

SUPERHOT!!!!!!!!!CAN B MADE IN@ A MOVIE!!!!!!!!!!KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK......PLS CONTINUE

Great read shame it appears that next chaptet will not be forthcoming

but its already complete & intact. Excellent work

Please don't wait to long for the next chapter on this Awesome story

I can hardly wait.

I understand I'm going to be the odd one out here but I was disgusted about half way through the first page. I'm pretty open minded, fantasy-wise, but I just couldn't tolerate the idea of such betrayal on all ends. Good writing though, just not my cup of tea subject wise. Oh well, to each his own.

When do we get the next part of the story?

you should start thinking this as an epic this story reads as truth to be told of some blue blood out there

a 1 for not finishing the story.

Finish this story there more chapters to tell.

great story please write more vey erotic

but would find it interesting if you added another chapter. Nice read, thanks for writing and sharing.

This was a good start, but where is the rest. Or at least a sequel

please continue.

Still alive I hope. This shouldn't end here; it's too hot and arousing. This, along with Seth's Fetish, is one of my favorites. I really hope you are still here.

I want a sequel with the birth of the baby and more fucking between Ethan and Laura. Have Laura give multiple births around the first and/or the second time. Even when Rob wants to take a break from all the babies, Laura keeps getting pregnant.

there is so much more to this story and I hope one day you will write the follow up/s to it. seems to me that ethan just may have some feelings for his daughter-in-law and vice versa that could be explored.

Everyone reading this story can think of many ways out of her predicament. In this story the supposedly intelligent character cannot.

a drug rape story is more like it and I hate a rape story sick people get off on

rape trash story

...leftover not continued.

I made it half way down the first page before my trash-o-meter went off. I thought 12 year olds weren't allowed on herr...

I enjoyed it. The best part was when Ethan took her on his lap and told her that he would do it on her marital bed. She had no other option but to remain on Ethan's strong lap and go to her bed. I also liked it when she told Ethan - "I want my tits to fill up with milk for you, I want you to drink from my breasts."

Once again, we see people posting unkind things ANONYMOUSLY .... Gutless twats.

Unless stated othetwise, these stories are fiction/fantasies and, whilst most of us find rape abhorrent, many find the FANTASY of forced sex thrilling and I believe that many couples use Play-Rape to enhance their sex lives.

If its not YOUR thing, fine, no problem but don't run a story or a writer down because YOU have a problem with subject ... Help the writer or SHUT THE FUCK UP.

The only problem I have with the story is that it's not followed by another chapter. Other than that, so hot. I am sure that Ethan will continue to impregnate her and I want to read about it. :-)

Where is the second part??? Do not leave us hanging on for more.

GE Tiger Suck my cock there

If and when husband finds out killem both

can't wait for the next chapter! Although pedos really aren't my thing, this story's really steamy.

Hopefully, she'll learn that she's having twins. However, the twins are the result of one of those very rare occasions where her husband is the father of one; Ethan is the father of the other..

I see you have posted as recently as DEC 2014-will you be adding a chap 2 any time soon? I love this story!!

I flat-ass do not like this topic nor how it was carried out

When is the rest of the story going to be finished? I need more!

a 75 year old would have a heart attack if he could get it up and have sex with

a hot young women.

That's just not how a cervix works. For shame! Completely ruined the story.

it was forceful

Made me so wet and had

To double click

Hope you will continue the story soon.

As usual, another hot story, unfinished by an author that just drops from the face of the earth. No comment from them, no explination as to why they didn't finish, no nothing! These authors, this one included, could at least tell the reader at the very begging that the story is incomplete and they have no intention of finishing it. At the very least, they could come back later, in a timely manner, and inform the readers why the story will not be finished. I'll go straight to the end of all future stories from now on to see if I'm wasting my fucking time reading a story that just stops. Literotica should remove any and all authors who do not complete their work or who do not submit something within a specific time frame. It's been so long since this author submitted a story, she'll never see this comment or any others written about this story. Authors, PLEASE stop wasting the readers time!!!!!

you should have finish the story before print you suck i WILL NOT BE BACK D67C

Good riddance.

More garbage from UK SCUM

The earliest comments are from about 2010, and it's now 2017. That's seven years. It seems to me that this story is unlikely to ever continue. While you may or may not see this, I found this story enjoyable. Most criticism seems to stem from the commenter's own issues, so they shouldn't be reading this anyways, or because you have not posted another chapte. This was one of my first stories I read on this site. It remains one of my favorite. Despite the fact you have not continued it, I don't really mind, and it doesn't affect how much I enjoy this chapter. While I am curious to see how it would have continued, I accept that it won't. Thank you for this wonderful story anyways.

out of attractive daughter in law and handsome father in law,hard to understand who had a secret crush for whom!! ;)

and hell....what will the lead lady do to terminate the preg she got by her pa in law? ;)

this opium dream story will continue?;)

Thank you for this very exciting read, keep up the great work..

can anyone email me true stories or videos or comics about black bad boys who are poor rough lowlife bullies thugs forcing orgasm on pretty white or asian lady bosses, teachers, faithful housewives, policewomen, execs, businesswomen, etc. molesting violating them humiliating them, breeding them against their will, turning them into bitches sluts sex slaves housemaids milking cow, devouring their earnings savings, etc.

i have been molested before so please don't ask about me, i just feel a deep throbbing deep down, whenever i read true stories or black comics and watch videos those things happening. The feeling of being wronged but why it gives some reluctant arousal!

email it to me at virgintsik1@gmail.com

I have read this story several times, and it is one of my favorites. I really hope you continue with part 2 soon.

And I keep coming back to see if chapter 2 was written, and I keep getting disappointed!

One of the BEST daughter in-law stories EVER!

Pleas write a chapter 2.

I m in love with this story..please continue

Please continue story.

please continue the story.. i am eagerly waiting for it

a solid 5

Is he blackmailing her or is she blackmailing the father in law? The story doesn't say. The reason I didn't like this story is because you made this girl so simple minded and weak. Even a high school drop out would have had the prescense of mind to defend herself. Why did she go back to the same doctor? Or why couldn't she say something like. "Yes we want a baby, But with the way you have been treating me your son wants the bloodline to end with him." That or "Of course you know I'm going to sue my doctor if I do wind up pregnant." Why didn't she go to a hospital and had an independant doctor to check her estrogen levels? Any sane person would have done any of a lot of things to defend themselves. I guess you just don't like a girl with any brains.

The father In law Is emotionally And financially Blackmailing the Girl.

@Widowedidiot.

Other than That, i Agree with You.

Make it where she has the baby and get another

Hope the story gets continued soon....

i read this story years ago. it will continue. "Sweet Pregnant Tits" should own up to this fact - unless s/he wrote it in the first place. not a bad story, but it's not original.

Would love to find out what happens next and seeing the father in law with her again. Unfortunately after all this time i assume something happened to the author like maybe she died

Of course you've read this several years ago, this was posted way back in 2010 dumbass! I swear, the level of idiocy some people have is just mind-boggling!

Please continue!

This bitch has no respect for her husband and that's shown by her lack of belief that he would protect her when she told him of this outrageous blackmail attempt. Didn't read most of this CRAP because the lack of imagination by the writers on this site keep up the nonsensical bullshit of women who fall instantly for the bullshit line.

... it has some very serious plot holes... anyway it was still good

Awesome story! Amazing and very hot. Thank you!

Amazing Story!

2 stars because you dropped this story like a ton of bricks. Could have been really good.

continue the damn story im so wet and i need someone to fuck me like this ughhhh i came all over my keyboard plz finish this

Seems abandoned but it was really hot and i hope to read what lies in her future with Ethan, really would like to read about him milking her

Why did you end the story so abruptly? You left us hanging. Finish the story!

Yes next chapter Dr needs to run test. The test also shows Rob is not the father. Rob gets into a fight with her and says he is going divorce her. She confesses what happened. Rob divorced her and got into a fight with him father actually put him in the hospital. Rob's mother didn't know about what had caused the fight and when she did she also got a divorce. Rob actually owned 40% of the family business and when his mother got 50% that only left daddy with 10%. Rob became CEO daddy got pushed out and moved away. Rob with his tender heart and the troubled pregnancy he finally forgave her and would go to theropy to try to get the this mess. They remarried 3 more children. Years latter when they had their 20 anniversary the oldest son tried to tease his parents about his mother getting pregnant before they were married he said dad mom. Rob just looked at his son and said son I am not your father your mother can explain that. She spoke to her son saying just learn from my mistakes you came to be when I made a a very serious mistake but we both love you very much. He asked then who is my father? She said that your father left when I became pregnant and know one has seen or heard of him sence. Life goes on.

While I liked the premise of the story, there was one thing that was puzzling since the father had the doctor give her birth control pills that were placebos which she had been taking over the past three months, wouldn't she have gotten pregnant by the son? What a jackass his parent's were, couldn't they just have told the son that since he was married to even what they felt like was someone unworthy of their background, ask them when were they planning on starting a family and then go forward with their stupid plan. Okay, I'm being to logical of a reader and forgetting that I am reading a fictional erotic story. On to Part 2

Finish the story! I want to hear about how he continues to breed her even after 1st child. And how he continues to milk her and continue in secrecy, that turns me on!

Need more to this story

Need another chapter pronto!

Whats next, does she give Rob another child after giving birth to overcompensate or does she try to continue her business making Ethan put another baby in her to make her stay home or does she willingly continue an affair with him?

I enjoyed it. In a way it reminds me my past some. I dont know with my 2 who they Daddy was I was messing around so much but like her I knew my kids was a Blessing always and I'm glad they ALL mine and I'm not with none they Dads. So I liked this story cause that.

This is my favorite of your stories. I love it's the woman's point of view in the story as she's seduced and bred.

I wish you do more of the woman pov.

Every guys dreams to impregnate a woman. Have yet to experience it maybe someday. Loved it

I’m curious to see how this continues. Good read though.

Is it bad I picture Robert Vaughn as Ethan?

MORE MORE

So fake from a preverted mind

You simply MUST write the sequels to this story. Ethan gets her pregnant a second time? It turns out Rob is sterile and he learns who the father of his children is and why!

I need her to get pregnant 2nd time with Ethannnn😭😭😭 this time twin boyssssss

I 2cnd MORE, MORE!!!!

You have to do a part 2. This sis so good and hot. I'm dipping with anticipation