All Comments on 'Blackmail Ch. 01'

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Paige21Paige21over 6 years ago
Erotic

I'm new nervous and shy.

I really enjoyed reading this and look forward to reading more.

Thank you

astuffedshirt_pervastuffedshirt_pervover 6 years ago
Well that was fun

Always love a good forced lesbian strapon story! Although it seems there would have been more internal dialog from Amber.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
you need an editor

This plot is some broke ass shit

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great job great plot

And great effort. Can't weight for more. Soon!

2soon2no2soon2noabout 3 years ago

This one made me horny! I did notice a few flaws that an editor would have fixed, such as missing comma's that were important, causing me to reread a few sections to figure out just what you were saying. The entire story line is well orchestrated, with the reader slowly realizing the degree to which Amber is a stuck up bitch, so her humiliation becomes attractive to the reader, and we get to see Amber realize how poorly she was seen by her classmates, except as a sex object. Lots of room for more chapters, and I will read them all. Thanks.

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