by Jokx60
Really loved this, great pace and imagination. Also loved the credibility of it.
I love the slow build up and the missteps - adds a semblance of realism. Would love to see another couple chapters where he tries to push her toward the level of her story and she tries to pull him back that it's too over the top. We need to see her surprise when it goes from just the texts, pictures and videos she somehow thinks it will stay at, to actually having to serve him.
Or maybe a new story - the same events (or taking off from here) from her point of view.
Absolutely love reading this story - please write another chapter!
Love the story so far... hope theres going to be more but dont rush the story the pace is perfect it seems more plausable the way its going!
Love this whole story so much! The slow burn at the start and the off and on really builds the tension. Any chance you'll do any more?