All Comments on 'Blackmail in the Pacific Ch. 04'

Keep it up, figuratively speaking, it's a while since I looked forward to the continuing episodes of a story I'm really enjoying Sara's predicament and when all is said and done she doesn't have any more debts, does she?73BC

Love it please update soon x

I'm really enjoying this story

OK the characters are still so 2 dimensional I can't keep reading.

Well, way too short of a chapter and, again, no emotion at all for anyone. Yes, Sara is excited, but she is not putting up any resistance. I wonder if there is an ending to this 30 days and Sara is returned to her boring life, or will she be turned and want to stay?