by Stillathisrequest
The fact that I feel so strongly about your characters is a complement to your writing. That being said, I sincerely hope she finds a way to bring these men to their knees then proceeds to turn the tables on them. All the while making it as painful and humiliating as possible.
I can't wait to see what happens!! The tension in this story is overwhelming. I am steaming! Your best yet, @Stillathisrequest! More please! :)
Preferably with up to and including extreme prejudice on Lucas. Keep it coming, it is a good read!
We don't lke Lucas.
I always enjoy it when a manipulative arrogant arsehole gets his up and comeance.
He is no exception.
Lovely writing. She does seem to spend a lot of time between liking and hating them though.
Oh - I think she is most definitely conflicted in her feelings. Most definitely...
I am sorry if it feels like I've abandoned you - I haven't, I promise. I'm trying to make it up to you. Go over to Fbook and look me up at Suzi Milan Books. Let me see if I can satisfy you in the meantime
Looks like the author finished the story and published it - http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00NVSRTXO
hope you decide to finish this story.it is such a shame to not finish such fine work and a damn great story. hope you do if only for your self. from arecent reader that loves yor work ,bob.
Hello from Greece! Very well-written story sir! It is a very social phenomenon, how a dominant species, or a dominant figure, with a lot of power can use it for good, for nothing, for anything.
Well, it is a very hot playing up to a good fucking but, as always, way too short. We just get to some good bantering around and Sara is so hot she is ready to explode....then nothing happens. Yeah the story is a long time ago but 10 chapters is good for maybe four at most. I doubt we will get to the end of the 30 day story. Too bad as I love the banter and playing with the butt plug as if nothing has happened. THe buildup is great and still too short.