All Comments on 'Blackmail in the Pacific Ch. 11'

Yo, who the fuck is Lily and where the hell is Sara?

I love your story but do hope very much that in the end she gets even with them for what they did to her I know she likes it ect but still blackmail ect and hardly ever do you see that where they get even in the end thank you please update soon

Well, I cocked that one up. As I mentioned, I've been writing on the story and one of the things I did was change her name from Sara to Lily. Obviously I should have changed it back... and thought I had... but clearly I didn't "Save" before I uploaded. Huge apologies if it confused or annoyed you. Mea Culpa

You can repair the change of names, but please continue writing the story. We've been waiting much to long :)

So glad you're back! Such a treat to see a new chapter. Can't wait for the next installment!

Good read, lots of fun!

Missed this story. You are lightening up Lucas too into someone more caring. Perhaps he's realised he will have more fun if she's less antagonistic.

Haha. I literally went back to the previous chapters just to check if it really was Lily or Sarah. That's okay though. I really love this story, I liked how you changed where the story is headed. I like how you introduce your charactets and I love how you make Lucas soft and rough at the same time. I love your story. Period. Pleaaaase make new chapters soon. :( I will be waiting for it!

Sincerely yours,

Rowalyn

Love this story line. Hope you finish it. Looks to be turning into an erotic romance, which is where I hope it ends. Look forward to seeing where you take it.

Ready for chapter 12!!! I bought the book online too and was disappointed not to get more. :_(

Sorry to be making the following note. With the quality of your writing, I was more than a little shocked with the change of character names from Sara to Lily in this chapter. Was this an oversight or done intentionally to learn if your readers are paying attention?

Cheers,

Lucky Star 61

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Hello from Greece! Well-described characters!

It is interesting what a human being can do for lust. We all have seen that in our past history. However, we can have lust for good, to make better ourselves each day for the goodness of the whole humanity and environment, and not just for ourselves!

I like "non-consent" stories, just for that.... it is better non-consent blackmail violence to be expressed in fictional texts than in reality!

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