All Comments on 'Blackmailed at First Ch. 02'

a build up to something?

Ensure....to make certain.

Insure...to mitigate an effect

Just stupid. They did all that to him and he did nothing. He probably liked it and didn't want to admit it.

a student of hers previously? He met her through his daughter, but they didn't know each other? I may have gotten that wrong as this was a true skimmer. He was some kind of forensic accountant or something, finding money people tried to hide, yet two employees were stealing money from him? This guy's life was truly fucked up. I suspect dementia, or possibly Alzheimer's.

In his next story maybe he will man up and beat his wife and hire thugs to do the same and finally the B.T.B morons will have a revenge story!!!!HOPE HOPE

You can redeem this story with one more chapter. One where Stan Mans up and gets proper revenge.

Part 3 "I put the pistol in my mouth and pulled the trigger." The end.

Maybe you should get your wimp ass over in the FETISH category where it belongs. Why are you even here? You sound like the kind of wimp that would prefer eating cream pies from his whore wife left by others.

If he did not report the matter, how did the school district learn that it needed to fire the three "strangers?" Second, his second marriage was six years ago and he never brought his adult daughter to his home--a home for which the daughter has a key?

However, this is one of those time where is makes no sense. There is nothing in this or the previous chapters to support it. There is a lot, in fact everything, to support him not wanting to have anything to do with her at all, whether it is platonic or sexual.

Like others have pointed out... she was Judi’s teacher. And she didn’t know who Judi was? Yes, not having seen a photo of the girl that was at his hotel, she might not have known who he had, allegedly, slept with. But all he had to say was, “That was Judi in my hotel last night.” Non-of the bullshit with the phone call.

Dumb. And usually I like The Keith stories.

My favorite OTT writer. He never leaves you wanting.

You continue in Part 2 as in Part 1!

"Due to the sensitive nature of my private work" what kind of nonsense is that? is he a criminal Even if he worked for an agency, they would take care of his problem for him. And if he's leaving the state anyway, what's the point of all this stupid talk? So what could prevent him from going to the police? Only the author, of course, because otherwise it would no longer fit into his story!