by TheKeith
You sure as hell are not getting much encouragement with this story, but you keep on posting. That determination is far more impressive than your imagination or writing skills.
Love this story..Old saying here,No one makes you read these free stories,If you do not like the story then dont read it..SIMPLE
Come on, folks. Get creative. Comments like 'moron,' 'you can't write' and 'crap' don't come up to any kind of creativity here at Literotica. Show us how truly literate you can be. I'll start off, stating, "the best part of you ran down your mother's leg".
There! See how easy that was!
Get out those keyboards and have at it!
And structure was better than average. The whole thing flowed well and had virtually no plot holes. Great job as far as that goes.
The story premise? Yeah, not so much. But please keep writing.
This was a sex-themed story. For those who still want wall-to-wall ultra-graphic sex on every page, I ask that you get a life. For those who are easily offended because I didn’t write exactly what you wanted to read, I’ll say the same thing. I also observe that the people expressing the worst, nasty, most virulent comments have—with few exceptions—either posted as anonymous or have never published a story under their screen names. Reading such comments is pointless.
Love it! Very imaginative and a lot of fun, which is not what one would expect at the beginning of this series.
What's so ignorant about this, is that the writer is making this like it's something worthwhile. The woman is just a waste. Anybody can get a no good piece of trash like that. There's nothing valuable or unusual about it.