All Comments on 'Blackmailed Teen Submissive'

Love your Lesbian Sub Stories. Very very hot!!!

i have never been wetter reading a story on lit. i cant even believe i orgasmed while reading and not touching myself. ive never done that before. im stacy18_bi@hotmail.com if you wanna hit me up

I almost wish that I was a lesbian when I read one of these sizzling hot stories from SSl !

Hoping that there would soon be a story by SSL, where a Mother is made to submit to her son in a similar fashion.

You have to finish this story, Kelly needs to be dominated

I can see so many different ways this can go. Erin's sister is also a classmate of Julie's and I think Auntie Lisa already knows Kelly and who will win in that battle will be a joy to read as well.

I do hope there will be a part 2

She commits multiple acts of criminal incest and becomes her aunts slave just because she doesnt w a nt people to find out she's bi...... and outs herself anyway?

The sex was hot but please dont ever bother with a plot again

Another chapter- will Lisa end up a sub to Kelly's raw sexuality? And what about older sis? Want another chapter!

Jasmin you have again excelled - wonderful story and I very much hope we will see future installments of this story

Wow, this one really had me wet. I love all your lesbian sub stories, but this one really knocked my socks off. Or my panties. There must be more of this with Lisa not only domming Erin, but also her other niece, and especially putting Kelly in her place, she needs to be a sub to all. You are a sub yourself I have read. Perhaps you could tell us how to seek out a domme. Please give us more of this.

This one is to read over and over.

Please don't end this story here! It has so much potential to be an amazing series!

Her last story about the teacher in Mexico was refreshing and great, now we are back to the same-old-shit

Pure pornography, doesn't even belong on this site.

Thanks a whole hell of a lot as I have to take a long cold shower again after reading another of your stories.

But the bad news is I had a 2nd mortgage to pay the ever-growing water bill.

I can try to critique literature, however outright slamming a piece of work and attacking the authoress is barbaric.

Perhaps it is Jasmine's fault, as all of her stories should please each and every one of the thousands of people that read them.

I think the story was decent. But for some reason after page 2, I was beginning to loose interest. It could have been better as you have written stories that were far more interesting. I think the whole lesbian domination angle is starting to get a little stale. I would love to read a nice romance though. Sorry if I sound critical, but thats just what i think,

I have never understood why someone would take to time to leave a comment, just to bash an author or their story. Anyone who has read stories on this sight knows what to expect from the majority of this author's writings. I find this trend to be offensive and pointless. How dare anyone, who is not the moderator of the sight, try to say what does or does not belong here.

All that being said, I thoroughly enjoyed this story and found it very erotic. Looking forward to more of Jasmine's stories. Keep up the great work.

Hi all,

First, this story was suppose to just be about the two teens... but as it wrote it it got bigger and ended up including Mom. (so I can see the comment about it losing focus part way through maybe)

That said, some of the other comments are hilarious. This is porn not erotica? What?

As for the commenter who liked my last one and hated this one, I try to write a variety based on what I like and what I get requests for. And lesbian domination is a popular request and one of my faves (although odd I should have to defend what I write)

Now that said, people can leave comments as they wish. That is why it is there. But it would be nice to have thoughtful criticisms instead. For example, flaws in the story or maybe where it Jumped the Shark for you.

I read all emails and all comments and try to improve from them.

But in the end, I write for fun and am not getting paid or anything...

Jasmine September 2015

Merchandising, merchandising, where the real money from writing is made. Jasmine T-shirts, Jasmine Coloring Books, Jasmine Lunch Boxes, Jasmine Breakfast Cereal,Jasmine Flame Thrower.

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Couldn't help myself. It was too easy.

Always love reading your stories. This one was as fun and naughty as the rest. So glad you share your stories with us.

...believe the stupidity of the people in these types of stories. I just can't put my brain that far in 'stupid' long enough for one of these types of nonconsent/reluctance stories to be enjoyable. You're a great writer, I just can't... Yeah, that about sums it up, I can't.

I'm a huge fan of your stories and look forward to reading them. Thank you for continuing to write.

I really like this one and I like your other stories and hope you continue

Would love to read more with Mistress Lisa claiming her new pets and then either conquering or being conquered by Kelly.

Loved this one. Quite the tease at the end, with so much more fun to be had.

Just love all your hot stories. Would like your email address. My story is not a good story. I was forced to suck a cock when I was 8 years old and he was 13. He was a lot bigger than me. He lived 3 houses up from me. All my friends back then we all played in the woods. He did beat my ass a few times when he caught me in the woods by myself. That's when me made me suck his cock, but after a while I liked sucking his cock. He didn`t cum much in my mouth. That was long time ago way back in the 60s. No little boy should have to go threw that coming up as a boy. I would never force myself on no body. When I was married to my second wife me and her fucked around. She liked to see my suck cocks and I loved seeing her lick a pussy. She used to come home late at nite and I would lick her pussy clean of hot cum. She never would fuck a black guy just don`t know why. Please email me back! Thanks Bobby email address-- Bullet.proof2011@yahoo.com

Sorry, but I normally like your stuff, but not this one. If I were Erin I would have beat Kelly with my tennis racket until she begged me to stop. I just don't get the appeal of the whole submissive thing. Oops she slipped in the shower and hit her head twelve times on the soap dish. Each to their own. What ever wrings your noodle out I guess.

Another great submission and of course got 5 stars. Now I'll just patiently wait for a sequel(s).

Good, very good!

Give us a sequel! I wanna see Kelly put in her place.

...toss Kelly's phone into the shower.

Also, should have been under NC.

Good detail and good suspense. I loved it.

You are really good at setting stories up and transforming the characters. Please write more lesbian incest stories.Particularly where the mother and/or the daughter are straight and something or somebody changes them.

You do a marvelous job setting stories up and then letting them flow through every turn with ease. Liked the story, but feel that since you have opened up the aunt and the fact that Kelly will be the daughter and mom's slut, well that just sparked new interest in this tale.

Keep writing more chapters for these exciting characters.

Please more! We want to read about Kelly's fall from the Top to the very bottom under the hand of Judge Lisa and the start as pet-slave to Erin and her mom!

Hope we read more of this Story soon

P.S Sorry if my english is bad but i'm from Germany

Enjoyed your writing style again. Now even reading your name starts to melt my butter. Laying here nude and wet, trying to recover from several small orgasms. Thank you ! I discovered sex through my relationships in high school. I had developed a crush on my best friends and we had begun to experiment. We had not gone much beyond touching and making out. The week before graduation I invited Pam and Stacy to spend the weekend at my house while my parents where out of town. My older sister Karen was not supposed to come back from school until the next Monday. I still remember how nervous I was when they first arrived and how quickly we stated drinking. We spent the evening talking, having fun, drinking, and finally watching movies in our underwear. Late in the evening I worked up enough nerve to suggest a game of Truth or Dare. Thankfully Pam went first, insisting that Stacy and I make out for 5 minutes. Stacy was gental with her touch but became aggressive with her tongue. I was instantly wet as she took command of me. My submissive nature reflected in my laying back into the rug. Stacy hovered over me smiling, her hand on the inside of my knee. I raised my lips to meet her kiss as I felt her hand slide down the inside of my thigh. Ahhhhh, her fingers rubbing the length my pussy as I spread my legs obscenely. My heels dug in as my hips began to rise and fall to the Stacy's touch. Suddenly responding to the sound of Pam's voice and hands as she removed my panties. I was used that weekend by my best friends and again by my sister Kraren who came home early to find us all nude in my parents bed. Thank you for reminding me why it's so good to love another women; and if your female readers would like a submissive middle age red head, please, please look Loni up. Still hot, still wet, and still needing to please.

I love it! This is so good! I hope there another chapter about their revenge... Thank you..,

have a twist at the end of the chapter. I hope that there is another chapter having Mom and Erin serving Mistress Lisa and another that lets Erin have revenge on Julie and Kelly put in her place.

As usual this is a very enjoyable story. You are without a doubt one of the best writers on this site. You're definitely my favorite writer here but as I was reading through the comments left here, there was one left by an anonymous commenter that was very interesting. It was left on 12/29/15 . At the end of her comment she called herself Loni. I think that she should write that story down and post it here. I guess I am just hoping that she revisits this story sometime and sees my comment and gives some thought to write her story or contact you and persuades you to write it for her. I believe that it would be a really good story. I hope she sees this and considers it. I really hope that Loni finds this. If not then maybe you could pick up the concept and write a story around it.

Such an entreating conclusion!!!!!! I have read several of your stories and they have all had me where I can not quit reading, wondering what new twists and turns you have in store for your readers. Bedding the baby sitter-Amazing and others as well.

As other commentators have requested I would love to hear how Kelly gets her just deserts. How could this all transpire? What tactics would be used?

Thanks again for your delicious stories.-

Billiebert

Please consider moving forward with this story.

As always a great story

I love this story could you please continue this story line

I WOULD LOVE TO READ MUCH MORE OF THIS, WITH MISTRESS LISA, MOM AND DAUGHTER REALLY ENJOYING EACH OTHER AND OF COURSE KELLY AND I HOPE JULIE, MUCH MORE PLEASE.

It would be great to see how Lisa helps them get their revenge on Kelly and Julia as well

Hmm I didn't like the ending too well but again it could be the way my brain thinks and the fact it is like every other story like it on here why not right 1 that has a different ending for a change instead of the bully always winning how about make it to where the person stands up to the bully and the bully leaves them alone cause in real life that would happen if someone stands up to a bully

Other than the story taking turn off of finding out that mom's a (lesbo slut slave, or would that be bi slut slave... hmm) slave or submissive (whichever, not here to debate semantics either way...) to her own sister, no less. It has a good progression point, nonetheless. It really needs to be added to, as a couple of the other commenters mentioned. Which, I have to agree with. I look forward to seeing more, of this particular story, jasmine aka silkstockinglover.

I want more and for sure more of the hot red head and her first pussy and lesbian crush

Need to meet Mistress Lisa!

Kelly needs to be their pet within a week, like Mom said.

Surely this can’t be the end? I want to find out what happens with Kelly.

I love that Kelly took her Mom to.

You had me, untill the incest. I didn't sign up for that when I started reading this story. A fair warning would have been nice before wasting my time on this.

I’d love to read about how a cocky wannabe Mistress gets broken

I love them all

I’m twisted on how much to like this story. Generally, I love to read about girls or mothers pleasing one another but not blackmail or other forcible relations. I like pleasure but not trauma. But now that we have it in an interesting beginning, we seem to drop it before knowing how Kelly is handled or how the relationship with the aunt develops. Usually you offer suggestions for continuing the story, but herewe are left with our own conclusions. I wish you were more interested in finishing stories rather than producing new ones for contests.

Sequel? Great story!