by silkstockingslover
Keep the racism stories in the IR section, barely any reason for this to be incest.
I admit I did help inspire a tiny bit of the story. I thought the dialogue and characters were pretty damn-well written. I like a lot of the character's lines which ranged from funny to quite witty. Thought the beginning interview scene and the sex scene at the end were the best as it tied things up quite nicely. SSL is just an amazingly talented and intelligent writer. That is all.
As with some others, I do wish there was more Eva. I guess i'll just leave this up to the imagination. The CNN/feminist meeting scenes would have been delicious. I tend to want stories that go on forever.
Overall really great work. This story feels like one of her best works just in terms of characterization.
well another really great story can't wait to read lots more of these and to hear more of Mary ,her mum and mrs harper
another great story from my favorite author. Please keep it up ( pun intended )
After the slow and way out there beginning I thought it would get better... I was wrong. I'm sorry for even wasting the time to write this review.
Some P.O.S. called Annonymous entered three very crappy reviews of this story. All I can say is that person is a real piece of crap. If you don't like the story, at least have the balls to give your name. If not, STFU!
As for me, once again I loved this piece. Silkstockinglover is one of the best authors on this site, and everything she writes is both erotic and kinky. Keep up the good work, and just ignore the reviews fro the gutless one named Annonymous.
Is there a second part to this story? I'd be very interested to see what happens next
I second that opinion! Ignore the anonymous morons! Truly an imaginative story! A story doesn't have to be completely focused on incest to be considered an incest story!
I'm hoping for a follow up to this, specifically more with how things turn out for Mary.
Mary will be the target of revenge by Sarah who willhave her munch black pussies while being fucked in pussy by black stud. Mercedes will approve of this to get Mary pregnant with a black baby and complete her humiliating transformation into a bbc slut. Eva will go to Carl's home dressed sans panties and bra. She will be surprised to see Mary there totally nude, shaven pussy and short butch haircut glaring down at her while holding a ruler. The humiliated mother will be gagged with a red ball affixed to mouth and told to follow Mary as she leads the way to bed for a disciplinary session. Told to strip out of clothes she lies on all fours on bed and be spanked hard for being such a prentitous bitch by Mary who will then order her to lick Mercedes to her satisfaction as ass turns redder from more smacks of the ruler. Then gets fucked by Mary's black stud. Eventually she signs POA giving Mary right to dispose of their money and property to a black foundation while.they take residence in a black neighborhood and watch white chastity bitches submit for their prentitious bitchy attitudes buy submitting to black men and women. Asses marked identifying thhem as submissive sluts.
You seriously need to add more chapters to this! The duplicity was delicious.
please keep going and have this feminist bitch fuck her daughter
This work is a huge reason why I write my own erotica now!
Raping her virgin Ass?
Black photographer was ugly?
Forcing triple penetration?
This is sadistic.
So hot, love the Daddy/Daughter teamwork towards global slutiness. Please write more!!!
You still have the Bride Submission Order of Syndom story series to complete and this story seems to either be a prequel or a sequel to that series and not an overlapping story series...
Excellent story, well written as usual and full nice humiliating sex acts. Wish this story had many more chapters as there are many avenues that could be taken with Mercedes having a variety of sexual adventures with different high class lovelies, fellow students, and forcing others to become her wonderful pussy lickers. The adventures could be endless. Great read.
I love your stories especially the Syndom stories. I keep hoping that you will finish the Bride Submission Syndom series!! By far my favorite series I've read on this site. Hope to read them soon. Keep these hot and sexy stories coming!!!
Admittedly I got lost in the beginning as I read this in parts at different times. But I like daddy/daughter and other girl action as well as the final submission and conquest. Submission stories are hot, but I prefer love and compassion better. As a side comment: Those guys who you praise for editing miss a lot of errors. I’m sure you would see them too if you reread your work which appears to have been dictated and not reviewed.