by silkstockingslover
Ok. She gets undressed. Not sexy. She undresses teacher. No steps by step approach. She just does it. Not sexy. She gets on her knees. Not sexy. She performs cunnilingus. No description. She just does it. NOT EROTIC.
Too bad, it had potential.
First, as another commentator wrote, you went into the sex too fast, and it lacked eroticism. Second, what you described is a crime in most states in the U.S., because even though the student was 18 at the time, the teacher-student relationship is one that is protected by law against sexual relationships. The teacher, if caught, goes to prison.
I wonder if people read the comment before launching into the story. It was clear this was a quick story written for a specific purpose. I enjoyed it as much as a longer more sensual buildups.
i just got it and love it put more female students in the next one and other woman to maybe other female teachers to ok
The idea is very good, but like others, I think that your story needs more and longer descriptions. I am waiting for the next chapter, describing the trio meeting.
very good story but i agree with some of the other comments , moved along a little to quick and there needs to be a little more dirty talk but you are such a talented writer i really enjoyed it maybe you could include the students mother as well.
I cant want to hear what Ms White has in store for Steffi and Jenny
Another very hot story I always love reading your work and cant wait for part 2
i look forward to your story submissionas and again you do not disappoint. You have a special talent for erotic prose and i look forward to the continuation of this and other strory lines you have currently opened as well as the new.
A super combination of lesbianism and cunnilingus...The blackmailing aspect is a cunning touch. Glad to see you you worked in the stockings and garters. I assume a sequel will follow. Thanks...Cunni
Very nice even though it was shorter than most of your stories. Looking forward to a Part 2, possibly.
i loved the story as always kept my black cock hard an oozing precum.
i love knowing all these thoughts in your head are some things that you realy would love to happen to you for real. I read this story and think of you doing this to a student like steffi. you do this but in my head after you blackmail her. the tables turn. i see her looking at you silkstalkings. with a devilish look in her eyes. thinking in her head. after today i wont need to cheat. i will just order my teacher to give me and anyone els i tell her and A. i can see her making you after eating her hot young sweet pussy. Making you tex her and tell her all you did to her. swaring that you will be her nasty little slut slave for the rest of your life. Making you send her naughty pics of your naked body. Doing what ever her young naughty mind wants.
your silkstalking would be her willing hot teacher slave. giving her nothing but streight A.s . and i no each un earned A that you give her wile being very hard on every one else would make your pussy so fucking wet.
i can see her now in your class sitting in front row of your hard class. a nice short skirt and no panties. cause she gave them to you and had you put them on at the begining of the day. so her pussy juices would be next to your pussy all the day long.
I can see her parting her legs and giving you nice long looks at her young sweet pussy wile everyone else works hard on there test. she sitting there with an sexy but evil grin her face. licking her lips teasing you. even texting you. saying things like bitch i better get an A. and i ant going to ever do your fucking test bitch. im too good to do your fucking hard test bitch. She would force to you respond saying things like. i would never give you anything less than an A my sexy mistress. Making you say that she is better than everyone else in the class. that she gets what ever grade she wants. that she is her secret slave for life. that you will eat her pussy and anyones else pussy when ever she wants you to.
she would read your responses to her tex on her phone and love it. knowing that she can blackmail you the rest of your life with the things you tex her. the more you tex her the more power grows in her cunt.
she knows she can make you do anthing she wants. she can make you fuck suck and lick and be dicked and you can do nothing about it. to top it all off you love the power she has over you silkstalkings.
i hope you love the way i think to. cause i read each of your stories and always imagine you in place of the older women. my cock gets hard just being your page.
thanks for the hot story. was not too long and not too short.
wow i would of loved to be one of your students. just thinking of all the kinky dirty letter i could of wrote you and you never would have told anyone. i would have been in your class wondering what sexy young girl is my teacher fantasing about today. i think its so hot that you think this way.
well i no your a buisy women. but hit me up if you read this and tell me what you think. i would love to keep writing you.
thanks again for another wonderful story
I hope you continue to write more chapters in this story, you left it open for at least 1 more chapter, hopefully more.
Keep up the good work
I really really hope you write more for this story. It is an awesome story.
What a great story and start I hope. I want the two girls using that double end dildo. More please.
You have left this wide open for another chapter in this story. Please don't let us wait too long for the next chapter. Keep up the good work you write very good storys.
you might want to edit it again though because she went from being Miss White to Ms Smith. other than that i think it was an awesome story and would love to see the sequel to this.
i'm confused was it miss white or miss smith because you switched at one point!
Please consider continuing the story. Would love to read what happens next!
This was so sexy. Please continue this story it is phenomenal. (; I had a fun time myself reading this.
SILK STOCKINGS LOVER I LOVE YOUR STORIES
I AM NOW A LOVER OF SILK STOCKINGS LOVER. YES YOU. YOU ARE CLEARLY MY FAVORITE WRITTER.
IS THERE A PART TWO TO THIS STORY, IF SO WHAT IS IT CALLED? IF NOT WOULD YOU PLEASE WRITE ONE. AND THEN TELL ME ITS NAME.
CLEARLY STEFFI IS BI. BUT I WOULD LOVE IT IF SHE BECAME A LESBIAN LEANING BISEXUAL
SSlover, I am a huge (and I don't just mean my cock) fan! I am a man and have enjoyed your stories more than I can say.
Thank You for lots of wonderful reads.
G
I love this story. You are a special writer......and friend.
-- Love, Maddie
You definitely left it wide open for a sequel or perhaps just to tease us (the readers and your fans) I think that's your thoughts coming to light.
MD
Teacher ought to have a stavble of little slavegirls from school thru college and even adulthood MORE Please
You got me all hot and horny need more to finish me off!"
Yet again you have written a brilliant story but please continue with it
Another chapter in this awesome story is definately needed!!!
I really hope you continue it!
Like everyone else,I can't wait to read Part 2, of, hopefully, "many to come in more ways than one"!
this is a good story, but I think blackmail should never be used to get sex at least not from students anyway
This story was written in 2011 and was excellent like the vast majority of your stories.
Although, this story really ended way too soon. Many more chapters could have been written regarding the sexual adventures of these three lovelies. You might like to re-visit the story and add to it. PLEASE!!! Love stories like this one.
What a teaser!! Sooo not fair, though I was warned it was a short, I didn't think that meant you'd stop before the big scene! LoL teaser! ;) Thank you
This story was great. No , it was amazing !!!
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I sure hope part two is coming soon. I always enjoy your writing. Thanks for another hot one.
I like this story vert much even though it was much shorter than others. Hope there is a part two or three coming soon. Having Rebecca's illustrations would also a great addition
Oh please add a part 2! This was one of the better stories I read here in a long time :)
Loved it! Two females, later three is so hot. I enjoyed the short story, but it would be more satisfying with some additional episodes. Oh, do I love girl on girl!
Wish it could have been longer, i enjoyed Animal Farm myself when at school.