by Seattle Zack
Very well-written. Good characterization and superb effort to let us see inside Jessica's head. Looking forward to more.
So glad to see a third chapter to this story. Looking forward to number 4! But, please, don't keep us waiting so long again.
I thought this was an extremely well written story. Very sexy and provocative. But I agree with the other comments. It was way too long between chapters 2 and 3.
I am really looking forward to chapter 4. The build up has been tremendous. Chapter 5 should be the party at her mentor's home.
I Realy enjoyed chapters 1,2 and 3. I agree with the other readers what happened to chapter 4 and 5.....
This is a great series! I wonder if its been too long to hope for more chapters?
Nick
I see marriage very soon for drew and jessica. I know their wedding night will be awesome. I also see jessica carrying drews baby in her belly very soon, probably during their honeymoon I wish them a lifetime of happiness together
I love this story. I want to become your wife and have your children
Sadly, another story left without being finished. I wish these stories were removed before a reader gets involved only to be left hanging...boo!!!
I agree with holly
Great story, beautifully written and no ending