All Comments on 'Blackmailing Mother Ch. 01'

Good start. Well written. Want to hear how he fucks her. Next time have mom in garter belt and stockings.

As usual , Michele you've given us the start of an erotic masterpiece. Can't wait for chapter 2

But please.. make this story go quite a few chapters.. those pantyhose never come off her legs, even when they have sex..have them go on dates, hotels.. have him tell her she can't see Roger anymore etc..9

Looking forward to part two, keep up the good work.

Hi Michele ,

As ever I have so loved this story start , I do hope you will flatter us all by writing some more on this delicious theme .

Hugs

Kathryn.. xxx

But way too short......

Loving the premise and look forward to more. Please.

Olen oma ema avalikkus wc keppinud.

That turned out hotter than it should have been.

Heading over to Ch.2!!!

would have been interesting to see if he would send the pictures to his father.... if she had firmly said no. see if he had the guts to do so. after all if he sent them he has nothing. and his so called plans go up in smoke.

that would be interesting to see in a blackmail story.. to see if the person has the guts to do as threatened. even if it ruins someone else. bottom line he doesn't get what he wants .

Try to reduce the repeation of words

Try to spell grammar correctly

YOU NEED HELP, GET YOURSELF A

PROOF READER, THEN A EDITOR.

THEN TRY AGAIN, IT WAS A GOOD IDEA.

..THANKS..

Niceeeee

would love to hear more of this mother son

You are amazing, Michele. You know how much I love your transgender stories, but you're good with incest too!! I love incest stories with your amazing twist. Thanks for exciting me. Can't wait to read what's cumming next. What does he have in store for his mom? My cock is ready to go again.

Love, sucks and fucks,

Bob

find_two2@hotmail.com

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Style and colour of panties would have been nice to know.