by Cole Black
Great story, love the detail and the build up to these two special people... Keep writing dam fine read
I absolutely loved your story. Your dialogue and characters both shined and left me wanting much more! Excellent work and hope to read more from you in the future.
Well written, likable characters with a steamy and mutually satisfying ending. Thank you!
Liked it a lot...liked the way you built the suspense...the passion!