All Comments on 'Blazing Glory Ch. 03'

Wow you write fast.

Really interested to see what will happen next. Keep up the good work.

I understand that this series is already written? If so, could you please release the next chapter soon? I am SOOO looking forward to it! Great storyline with only a few minor typo's. I also hope you have other series in your repitoire.

Blaze is an idiot when it comes to women

Thanks again for the kind comments and I am very glad everyone has enjoyed the stories so far. This series has 12 chapters written so far and is close to finishing. I have had real life issues, work, and college slow that process a lot but I am determined to finish this. I am uploading them as quickly as I can but they were done when I was younger and more inexperienced. So I am carefully going through them to try and catch as many mistakes to correct as possible before submitting them. So far I am glad people have said there are only a few typos after the many I have corrected already. I promise more to come as quickly as possible. =D

I've really enjoyed the story and character development. Great job :).

Great great story! The odd typo did put me off and could do with correcting, but the story itself is brilliant. Keep it up!

Interesting development in the story, hopefully Nadine will join in Blaze and Kendra's relationship and he'll get a "harem". I found the whole bug battle thing really weird though, seriously a bug with a dick? Kendra's whip can cut through iron but can't break through chitin? Anyway, suspension of belief but then again why didn't she just whip the bug's dick off, then she could kill the bug by continuing damage through the hole caused, unless you're saying the bug's penis is invulnerable as well. I understand this is supposed to be an erotic story but plot-wise, a lot of things require a lot of suspension of belief.

It ends up as some developments as feeling forced, like the recruitment of the goblins and then the weird battle between Kendra and the bug.

honestly I don't like the mother son incest (skipped that part)

but i can't really blame ya. It was a good story with an amazing twist (it had a plot! :D ). thx for the upload/story!

Two things have bothered me thus far - the large amount of typos (everyone has them, but really, a good editor would catch most, if not all), and the incest scene. Yeah, I get it's a siren, the song arouses, but really? I felt as if you were trying to satisfy every possible audience member, but in doing so, you end up appalling some, possibly straying from the overall story. My English professor had once told us "Always ask yourself if this scene is truly necessary - more oft than not it will only detract from the story as a whole."

Otherwise, I paused to comment after this chapter, although much later after you've posted, to commend your skills at creating vivid, likeable characters and a truly epic-feeling story. I'm eager to read the rest now.

Rex

Interesting story so far. Why Kendra didn't take control of those men and bug with her own succubus power? If I remember correctly her kind also has ability to control men.

the authur ether didnt know or simply left it out to make it more intresting

it would have just become a massive fuck-fest, cos that's almost literally her power.

If all else fails, fuck it to death

I absolutly love the story so far it the a great plot great characters and just an all around great story the author would seisoly have to screw it up to make it bad from here

just a tad much, more plot and action needed

JC

yeaaa... the goblin, orc, and insect scenes ruined the entire story. i nearly dropped it after the orc scene but decided to give it another chance, after this? nope. you wanted some monster semi-rape scenes i guess. either way, because of it, ill just drop the story. pretty sure my boner actually shrivelled up during those scenes, but hey everyone is into something i guess

There were 4 sex scenes in this one chapter. That's more than one every other page.

Sorry, but that does take away from your story

JC

Awesome story keep it coming!

the rape and gangbang stuff is ruining the story. Also thefact that the girl has sex with a monster but gets jealous when blaze had sex with the catgirl

keep up the good read

Cuckold tag.

Cuckold tag.

Geezus. It's dragged not drug. You drag or dragged the thing, not drug it. Why do so many writers get this wrong? Is it an American thing?

Please please use a thesaurus app and grammarly. It will make things more readable. Still a great story.

I really love the idea of this story but you seriously need an editor... like bad. You should have them edited and resubmit. Your ratings would go way up