by davion2308
the story is well written and builds the suspense u were looking to build. your herione is also very interesting and i can't help but feel it was too short as i would love to read what happens next! great story!
you can't just leave this hanging, gotta finish it! with a lot of chapters please
I think you should have made it so you can continue this story it is very good
I liked it. There were a few spelling errors, but i liked it. you did a good job. If it was filled out a little bit more and you had part 2 then 3 you could have a book easily. I would buy it and read it over and over.
This reminded me alot of World War Z. Same realistic semi-documentary feeling.
Keep it up. wouldn't mind reading a second part.
This is good, I like Meredith's lack of sensivity.
The way it's written, we have to guess a lot to follow, it's great!
Belivable and interesting story and setting. Please continue the story!
Good start. It leads to a good storyline and follow up events. You should continue.
My last comment went as an anonymous. Dont wanna be labeled as a freeloader lol.