All Comments on 'Blind Date'

maybe I'm slow, but this story just didn't seem to flow right.

Great story, got off twice on your lovely writing, especially as it reminded me of the loss of my own cherry.

Keep writing please, would love to hear more.

Sue from UK x

PS if you would like to know more about me please read 24 HOURS

It's kind of hard to get into the story when all I kept thinking was what an asshole the guy was. Predatory and utterly one-dimensional. No insight was given into his mind aside from "must stick dick in hole." The woman at least had some thought process going on; the author neglected to extend the same courtesy to her partner. More pornographic than erotic. The writing overall was good, but I would like to see more character development and inner dialogue.

Meant to be a first time but dosn't read that way sounds almost like rape

Not so much a story as an assortment of sex cliches.

Having a guy force you to deep throat him is not my idea of foreplay, and I don't care how good-looking he is, he'll find his ass on the floor and then be shown the door. And don't let it hit ya where the good Lord split ya.<br><br>

I'd also look for better friends, if this is the sort of blind date my current friends would set up for me. <br><br>

This is more forced/reluctance than erotic coupling I'd say. For a girl's first sexual experience, it wasn't erotic at all. Poor girl, hope her next time is with a man who actually knows how to give pleasure.

she might not want to try again. He was a jerk.

We can hope he is reported and while inside he gets the same treatment he gave her.