All Comments on 'Blind Date'

by OwensDarlin

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Scotsman69Scotsman69over 14 years ago
Very fine

A beautifully executed piece of fun. Seriously good writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great!

I am VERY excited to read more! Clever, good writing!

woodmanonewoodmanoneover 14 years ago
Enjoyed your story, but

it begs for a least one more chapter. Please don't make us wait too long. Good writing, very good flow, and very interesting. Grabbed and kept my attention with the first paragraph. I would like to see more, including the fleshing out of the characters. Good work, keep it up and thanks.

bruce22bruce22over 14 years ago
Fine Start

We will be coming along for the ride.. It was a bit on the short side, though.

OwensDarlinOwensDarlinover 14 years agoAuthor
Thanks for your feedback!

"Blind Date" was written for an under-2500-words, slice-of-life-romance contest several years ago. At this time, I don't plan to add to it. That could change if inspiration occurs later. I do apologize for not letting you know that up front. (I intended to but forgot.)

Thanks for your kind comments and votes, and for adding my story to your Favorites. All are truly appreciated.

pouncingtigresspouncingtigressover 14 years ago
excellent

Every once in a while, there's a gem like this story in the slush pile of new stories.

I'm sorry to hear that there's no follow-up, as the ending did seem to be a bit abrupt (and now I know why).

But maybe one day we'll see a new story?

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Excellent Work,

Darlin, but you sure do leave the ending hanging out there in the open!

PenningFreerPenningFreerover 14 years ago
Great fun, great wit, joy to read!

Another delicious read and rockin premise. I love your stuff and look forward to popping in for a read!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
More!!

Give us a little more. This would be an awesome story to finish...

Great writing!

germangirl67germangirl67almost 11 years ago
good story

Continue plz!!!

rightbankrightbankabout 9 years ago
I think if there hasn't been a 2nd chapter

in 6 years, it's not going to happen. too bad, it started well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
You're a different kinda writer

terse I guess but I like your stuff and wish there was more of it ... Scotty

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Needs another story or two

Not because it is so good. Need a couple of chapters to figure out what is being said.

Not gonna read them tho I feel sorry for poor me.

Horseman68Horseman68over 1 year ago

Really wish this author was still on the site. Such a great talent and writing style.

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