by PapaRomantic
So nice to see them spend some quality time with each other and deepen their love, even if it's mundane stuff like professing their love each morning or heavy like reminiscing his late wife. And his plan to gather his daughters does sound good so I'm really looking forward to it when it takes place, keeping my fingers crossed that neither of them flips out.
5*!!!
Your story touched me. I was really into the compassion that the characters showed one another and you obviously know what love is. Thank you for this.
Ciara is two years younger than Catherine. A mistake my editor (me) didn't catch!
I feel the pain, I feel the love, I feel the heat. I experience it all. I can't wait to meet the daughters.
Totally believable, I'm feeling the emotion of two people who really love each other.
The good thing about this story is you're not filling it with gratuitous sex that makes no sense.
I hope the daughters are introduced realistically and accept their Dads new found love as they should.
Please keep up the good work & I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.
The love you have created is wonderful and amazingly heartwarming. It makes me wish and believe in that kind of love. Thanks for sharing.
But not at the expense of the story.
This chapter seemed like not much happened to move them forward.
What an amazing love story the author has created with this storyline. A journey that has literally brought two lost souls together as soulmates. Well written such great passion. Well done 5+++stars
That scene at the cemetery was touching. I won't lie, a few tears were shed. So emotional. It's always difficult losing someone you love dearly and I can only imagine the depth of the anguish for someone you have loved for most of your life in such a deep, romantic way. My heart goes out to anyone that has experienced this kind of loss.
At the end there when they made slow, passionate love with no climax or even desire to, was really beautiful. A true expression of a love whose depth knows no bounds. It's not about the sex or release; it's about the intimacy and the connection. I love that. Something I hope to experience one day.