by SexeJouet
I really liked this story. And if I'm honest, while I was reading I was sure that I'll give you 5 stars. The only reason I didn't, is because you didn't include any sexual activity at all.
But this story has the potential to be one of the very best.
All Right: you got the "prologue" out of your system. But it was a very good prologue. You enables the reader to understand the characters. Keep writing.
This was a good prologue but I am hoping that you get to the core of the story soon. This could be a very interesting story depending how it plays out. I look forward to reading about their second date and further.
I really enjoyed your intro! I can't wait for another installment to see how things work out for them.
If only all blind dates were this fun! Lol.