All Comments on 'Blind Date Gone Right'

by SexeJouet

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BloodyIdiotBloodyIdiotalmost 9 years ago
Nice intro

I really liked this story. And if I'm honest, while I was reading I was sure that I'll give you 5 stars. The only reason I didn't, is because you didn't include any sexual activity at all.

But this story has the potential to be one of the very best.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

All Right: you got the "prologue" out of your system. But it was a very good prologue. You enables the reader to understand the characters. Keep writing.

gentleoneexplorergentleoneexploreralmost 9 years ago
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This was a good prologue but I am hoping that you get to the core of the story soon. This could be a very interesting story depending how it plays out. I look forward to reading about their second date and further.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
49 shades of silver

hehehehe, I seriously chuckled so hard at that.

abmarieabmariealmost 9 years ago
Great job!

I really enjoyed your intro! I can't wait for another installment to see how things work out for them.

If only all blind dates were this fun! Lol.

MissesmeMissesmealmost 9 years ago
And.....

Please....

Don't keep us waiting for too long...

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