by iggyspear
I agree that the words cited by Anonymous were lame and off putting. And the amount of "whale juice" - really?
the story was hot but your choice of words was kind of lame; "whale," "corn hole", "clam" and "crank it"? nobody actually uses those terms. That made it kind of unrealistic. otherwise pretty hot.
Hand jobs are under-rated... and the idea of hours of teasing and stimulation is very exciting. I'd love to hear more about Amy's sexual repertoire!