by sagacious21
call it a five-star.
This was a most unexpected and unusual ending, but entertaining, regardless.
Love the story, but other than Diane and Justine, the others girls' stories are very very depressing. Worse though, is that somewhere in this world, shit like this is happening to women. I'm not saying they should get their own Aaron, but I wish the stuff you wrote about all those women were just fiction. Horrible fiction.
I bet Aaron does love his life, he gets women thrown at him without him asking.
This is just pure SHIT! And you dare to put this in romance? Absolute HATE!
The story was okay, until you introduced the two lesbians, Kim and Angel, into the mix. Then Aaron became pussy whipped, "yes dear", submissive at best.
Good story I give it 4 stars as this last story and the one before kinda kills the mood with the dark horrible reality of how this world really is... Totally killed my erection in all of 3 minutes its good to have dark stuff in a story but preferably before all the hot and heavy goodness starts. Also the dark stuff shouldn't come about in the middle of really sexy scenes because it kinda cheapens the sexy scenes pulling to much out of them by turning the story cold and dark.... I wouldn't call this a straight up romance this reads more like a horror tale with a romance sub plot
interesting,any shaped family that puts the love for their children first and foremost in building the family unit is an awesome thing..children need to be exposed to romance.so often now days marriage seems to be financially based and short term and romance pushed into the arms of commerce. still an interesting story and I liked it