All Comments on 'Blindfold Gangbang Ch. 01'

by SweetMarie2010

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Frankly SpeakingFrankly Speakingabout 14 years ago
It started but...

It started but it was much too short causing a lower rating. Pretty well written though.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
maybe you should write

when your all fucked out and not horny anymore, then perhaps you could write a chapter. I read longer jokes than that and with a bit more sense.

SweetMarie2010SweetMarie2010about 14 years agoAuthor

Sorry it is a little short...its my first time writing really and I didn't want to keep going and be over length. Working on the next chapter now....if you still want to read it that is.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Needs more slutty sweetmarie

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