All Comments on 'Blindfold Me'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

The story isn't bad but watch the grammar/ verb tenses. Also, I felt like the story didn't have anything to do with the blindfold. Maybe talk about the other sensations and the effect of not being able to see. 5/10

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