by alwaysthefirsttime
This got me all wet and bothered and I'm not even into incest.The only thing I'd have changed is for the brother to NEVER find out.
One spot that I would correct is when Jamie says, "I want to fuck my brother." Andrea asks a paragraph later, "You know he's your brother, right?" Of course she does - she just said so! It would be better if she'd said, "I want to fuck Jeremy." Other than that it's pretty good! It would be interesting to know why a girl would stop birth control before fucking her brother, but people do stuff I can't understand all the time. Thanks for sharing.
I felt like there was something missing for the 3rd wheel. She let go of that really quickly and quietly, even internal thought wise. Not much anger or depression just "ah well looks like that's how it is"...
I don't know. Just felt off.
But the story was good and I liked it.
As bother / sister sex goes this was excellent, believable and well executed. Any more about them to come?
While fucking my girlfriend i called her my sisters name, she asked if i wanted her, i admitted i had wondered what it would be like, she surprised me saying my sister had told her she wanted to fuck with me, no set up just walked into my sister bedroom one night and fucked her for an hour, GF is happy to let this continue as long as she gets me too.