All Comments on 'Bliss Ch. 01'

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Prof_EmmaProf_Emmaalmost 12 years ago
A lovely beginning...

I look forward to reading more.

britbrit1103britbrit1103almost 12 years ago

This was very erotic and extremely arousing. I love the writing, it flows very well. Excitedly looking forward to the next chapter!

MaynessMaynessalmost 12 years ago
Great Start!

Interesting start, love the characters! Looking forward to the next chapter.

availableslave2uavailableslave2ualmost 12 years ago
Wow!

Great, erotic start. I look forward to seeing what happens next.

GrumpyGambyGrumpyGambyalmost 12 years ago
Have a happy period...

Hope the fictitious marketing team beats the crap outta the real marketing team. Happy Period? Happy Period? Just pisses me off! Go get me tiger!

Ah yes the story, loved every second. Hotly erotic, right amount of tension, likeable people in all ways. I liked the spontaneous tears in the elevator. I liked the way Malcom seemed to know instinctively what prompted them, even if that might be "hopeful to the point of absurdity" that a man would understand.

Excellent story! More more more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Strong first chapter

You are an excellent writer! Keep going! I really enjoyed your story, both in content and in the telling of it. -Karen

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Delightful!

So wonderful to read writing of this caliber by someone who truly understands that D/s doesn't have to be about disdain and humiliation. Fifty stars.

elisebeeelisebeeabout 11 years ago
Perfect!

This is my third or fourth time reading this series. Lovely.

EuphoriaSlam69EuphoriaSlam69about 11 years ago
Whoooooooa!

She's in trouble! The best fucking trouble ever! Go Melody

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Exactly what I was looking for!

This is why I come to this site. You are awesome!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Dick's

It's true. There is no place to sit at Dick's in Capitol Hill.

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