by wanderingmindgames
Thanks for adding another chapter. I love this story and hope more chapters follow soon
What a delicious chapter. Was hoping you would add to the story and you have done so brilliantly. Love the depth of feeling between these two, with both displaying their own insecurities it makes it very believable. Fantastic read as always. Thank you. M
I am so glad you continued this story. I have been checking back often and was worried you would leave us hanging.
I am connected with the characters because of the skill of your writing. Please continue saga soon. I love it.
I love this love story. It's sexy as hell, but the character development and plot line really make it the addictive chapter story its become. Thank you for writing and sharing some excellent erotica!
With him whipping her arse with a switch made from nature's own maple tree! Delightful!
I've been reading erotica for 7 years. This is the best I've ever read. Excellent! Will be a favorite of mine forever!
So many dark and off the (my) charts fantasies around here. This was a sweaty, sparkly fantasy real enough to make one truely hopeful of fulfilling it. Your glimpses inside the thoughts were as, if not more, affecting than the actual sex-which was gasp inducing itself.
I have never read anything quite like this it is the most erotic piece of work I have read. The fantasies the controlling the essences please for the love of god dont say this is the end there is so much more for you to tell. Give us more of this could not put this book down. I am off the read it again. Keep writting you have a gift.
Your story is one of the most amazing story I have ever read in erotica!! It has perfect balance of everything.. Plz continue the series.. I have been waiting for the next update from a longggg timeee.. Continue this story plzz..
That was the most amazing story that I have ever read - I have never commented before, but I just knew I had to this time. Please continue writing, I am so anxious to continue reading what you have to share with us - thank you.
Your story actually expressed everything I want and feel. Your characters are amazing and up love watching their story unfold. Please let us see more. : )
Please don't let this be the end! Your writing is my favorite. So please continue!
This is the second time I've read Bliss and I love it more than ever. I agree with every comment before me that this is one of the most erotic and romantic stories I've ever read. I so hope to see more from you in the future!
Such a beautiful, well written story. Honestly, I'm sad to see it end.
Such a beautiful, well written story. Honestly, I'm sad to see it end.
Such a beautiful, well written story. Honestly, I'm sad to see it end.
Such a beautiful well written story. Honestly, I'm sad to see it end.
Such a beautiful well written story. Honestly, I'm sad to see it end.
Such a beautiful well written story. Honestly, I'm sad to see it end.
This is a wonderful story and a treat to read. As every chapter is better written than many published stories, I will continue to read and hope for future postings from Wanderingmindgames.
I love this story. I want this story. This story has kept me from getting ready for work and I'll be late. I'm oddly ok with it. Well done.
Really fine, pauses at a good point but would have liked more closure. Wish the author would take it up again. A joy.
I’ve read this in its entirety multiple times. It is by far the most beautiful story I’ve read on a literotica type site. It turns me on, gives me strength, and is just simply put, beautiful. Thank you for sharing. I’m not sure if this is based on true experiences (because it certainly seems real enough to be just that) but regardless well done. It’s absolutely amazing.
I have read this three times now in its entirety and it is the most beautiful story I’ve read on literotica (which is to say a lot as I’ve been reading literotica Noncon and BDSM for years). It Turns me on, gives me strength in who I am and what I feel, and is just so well written. I cannot say enough. Thank you so very much for sharing this story.
Laura