by Eternalivan
I like the story and am anxious to see what happens with Sean. Obviously, he will change his mind at some point. However, this installment is way too short.
This makes sense now. lol I liked the emotions that they displayed. I could feel the betrayal and pain, the fear and heartbreak, the lonliness...
looking forward to another chapter!
That was so strange, but hey, everyone makes mistakes, even Lit. I don't think changing Sean's mind is going to be as easy as everyone thinks it will be.
i thought i clicked on the wrong story or something and went back and clicked again...cant wait for the REAL chapter
Literotica made a mistake........
Eternalivan sent a msg..& said Lit.posted some other chapter &
he hopes to have it corrected by Monday & sends his apologies.
Huh? Um... I am so confused. Sorry to say it, but it seems like someone hacked your account. Not only is this not in any way connected to the story (as far as I can see), but it's very coarse with no plot. What happened?
Unless evan and sean are playing dress up....im lost. Im sorry but that was wierd. Is this corner fucker a vampire?? I hope ch 12 clears this up, because I think I speak for everyone when I say this is very very out of place. I was enjoying thisseries....now i'm left with an overwhelming....whhaaaaat?
Ok ill wait until next time.
Night
Er what was that. Is this a wrong posting? I'm confused as hell.
Evan and Sean - Gay male - did someone post in the wrong genre? Bring back our guys the cliff hanger needs an answer
I am really confused....what is this? ummm we left off with Evan admitting he was a vamp to Sean. I have no idea what this is....and I was looking forward to seeing how he would react.
cannd