All Comments on 'Blood Feud Ch. 01'

I'd love to see where this goes. Keep it coming!

Am looking forward to reading more! :)

Please write more, i am looking forward to the next part and you are now one of my favourites.

When I read this yesterday, the minor grammatical errors and your strange disclaimer about not being gay put me off and I only rated this a 4. My mistake! I woke up this morning still thinking about your story and I realised that you have a rare talent for this genre. I had to come back and comment to share my appreciation as a reader. The charaterisation and world-building are fantastic, the dark and fast-moving plot engaging, and the sexual tension wickedly palpable.

I can't wait to find out how your proud-but-fragile hero and his mysterious sexy saviour reconcile their attraction. Hopefully you are building up to some sizzling sex!? Please continue, I promise there will only be 5 stars coming your way from now on!

Glad part 2 is out. Re-read ch 1. I am just as intrigued as the first time.

. Just a quick note that the past tense of "Lie" as in "go lie down" is "laid" (you wrote 'lied') Example: "he laid down on the leaves"

Reread chapter one also because I was so curious to see a connection that I think is going to occur :3 I can't wait to read the rest when you are finished writing! :D This is such a nice read/intriguing read ^^

Sorry. My dictionary lyed to me, then I realized I was reading the wrong word form. T_T