All Comments on 'Blood Passion Ch. 01'

Please seek help of an editor, the grammar use and spelling was extremely off putting.

Pretty good , could even maybe be great the grammar and some word choices let you down. Think maybe your handle should be ESL Teacher

Hmm, there's definitely something to be explored here. I'm curious to see him with all of the women. The mother and aunt are fascinating characters that have a lot of potential. But if I'm thinking what kinds of beings the sisters are, or possibly are, you will need to make their senses more keen.

(Not a fan of him using the 'b' word. I thought he'd be more of a gentleman. Granted, I know the girl wasn't very nice, but he shouldn't have said that. Guys I've seen who've said that about women aren't very good to them. It's up to you, but guys who are rough/disrespectful with women in any form or fashion aren't very honorable to them.)

Too many women that need sex and a stud ready to give it to them.

I found it to be a fence-sitter. Middle of the road....not sure what grammatical issues others found; I thought it was far better than most, as far as that is concerned. Just sort of boring.

I have been looking forward to this series. I was hoping for a bit more action. Should be interesting when his mom and aunts see the ivory tower for the first time.

Well done.. I'm going to enjoy reading this series. 5*

Will there be sequel to this?

Great story dint take too long.

@Anon: Yep, more will be coming. Just is a matter of time and planning vs. life and the other chapters.

There isn't any update for a long time. Plz update

Very yummy indeed! Thank you for sharing this with us!

I hope not! Too many errors such as "hunny" and "winched" in the first few paragraphs. I just started reading this and will continue.

Should be in the lesbian section. Not erotic at all. 1*

It seemed this stiry was going to be about a mother being tempted to engage in an incestuous relationship with her son but later it is hinted that incest is a tradition in the family and that there is not gonna be any resistance. I prefer the incest stories to be about seduction and that there is fight to resist temptation. It is question of tastes.

Very good so far but there's no incest waiting on more 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!