All Comments on 'Blood Relations'

MORE DAMMIT!

Great start!!! Really looking forward to more!!!!!

Ready for more love the chapter length! Great read

I hope Adam is not her mate. He seems immature for his age and she seems emotinally mature for her age. Beside I don't like him LOL Serious , I don't like him, he rub me the wrong way.

I dont really like adam that much he seems kind of selfish why would he want to hurt serena in order to get back at Malcolm it seems really selfish of him , and I think it was fukd up of piper to leave serena in the club knowing that she is new to the town and doesn't know anyone regardless if she found her mate it just doesn't seem ok

I like that your characters are showing depth in their personalities. Having a back story of some sort was nice as well. We have Serena's back story but what is Adam's? I know that he is coming across as an ass and have to wonder in which ways he is going to develop. Sometimes people are just assholes and won't change and that is part of life.

This first chapter is very captivating, I hope it continues to be so.