by icehead
that was so great!i loved t.it was not like all those other stories on here which were only about sex.it was like life.with feelings and emotions.i would like for you to write more right away.i love elizabeth with tyler.he is so cool.you can tell he really loves elizabeth.i also want tyler to know about elizabeth being a vampire.that would help him understand how come she keeps saying they can't be together.and why he does not see her in daylight or at school.i love your story so much.you have the potetial of a true writer.i really mean that.anyone who is reading this should.take a few lessons from this guy and write your stories with the heart,soul,dreams,and skills of a true writer!
you just can't leave the story off right there. it getting really good and i can't wait to read the rest of it. Please put me out of my misery. please just finish the story IM BEGGING YOU!