All Comments on 'Bloodlines'

I would love to read more of this story, it's sounds most intriguing

Oh yeah, love it, keep it coming.

I love itI really want to see where this is going however I have a couple of critiques. First-they are REINS. second,you repeated "salty" twice within a 5 word span,"revulsion" within a 35 word span. And lastly-they had already lit the lantern-there was no need to light two more matches to build the fire. Otherwise,I gave it 5 stars!! Ricah is such an evil bitch!!! More!

I finished chapter 2 wishing there was more. Looking forward to the next installment.

Good intro and character development so far, can't wait to see more.