by zagrebzagreb
This was interesting and fun. Wonderful story so well written. Thank you for it.
From the title, to the last thought, there is not one false step. It was everything I hoped it would be, and more.
You've written a porn story about a bunch of believable characters who want to write a porn story about a bunch of believable characters. And the female lead is AWESOME! I want to meet her sooooo bad. :)
Really liked this story. Wasn't perfect, but nice timing and pace. Well done.
This was a job very, very, very well done. For all its down-to-earth workaday realism, it was incredibly sweet - but in a way that made it about two everyday people maybe starting a relationship, rather than in a fairy-tale manner.
That last part bears repeating - both Vada and our unnamed protagonist seemed very much to be real people, with all the little drawbacks and bonuses that come with the state. Plus you made Krakov weirdly likable, which is pretty impressive given the initial impression you gave of him.
All in all, a fantastic story - one I read more for the story itself than any pornographic content, but that didn't detract from it for me.