All Comments on 'Blue'

please continue with this character and others -5

I didn't know under what tag I should put this story. I would have liked "Crime Story" but that was not a choice. Perhaps "Comic" would have been better but few readers seem to like comedy at this site. Well why not "Anal"? There sure is a lot of fucking and sucking leading up to the climatic anal scene. So that's where it ended up. Perhaps "Comedy Crime" might have worked, some of the scenes and comments are quite funny, at least to me. Let me hear your comments. Love you all and please stay away from Blue, he's a real pain in the butt. Erectus

A shout out to my buddy Ashesh!

Bro!!!! I 5-ed as well ass Fave-ed!!!

Jabroni ya fuckin jabroni

welcome to the family!!!

A nice *homage* to tough-guy pulp fiction and a fun story. The narrator/character Mr. Blue is very nicely realized, and Belinda was especially enjoyable (to a reader, I mean--though apparently otherwise too). I had a good chuckle at the Belinda/Blue relationship at the very end, at W.C.C. The sex scenes were pretty sexy, too. I gave this one a 5.

Thanks, Pete, nice review! It doesn't seem it was written three. years ago.

Time on this planet is revolving too fast.

Fun story for 5 stars! Good Writing, Good Story. I loved the happy ending. I really liked the big tits. LOL Regardless, thanks for the Great Effort! Very interesting and kept my attention. Thanks #Buster2 U