All Comments on 'Blue'

by alouette_oubliette

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Scotsman69Scotsman69about 12 years ago
A few wee niggles with your writing

but still a powerful and arousing tale.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

You need to have an editor remove the French from your text.

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