All Comments on 'Blue Ch. 01'

by Danae72

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ingarlmingarlmover 14 years ago
Good start

Glad to see you back with a new story, and you've built the scene nicely so I look forward to seeing what happens to Blue.

PiaraqPiaraqover 14 years ago
awesome

so good to have you back :)

dinkybootsdinkybootsalmost 12 years ago

i dont know how ive missed this story......its very good and so far has my attension.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
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I think that this is an interesting story you have told here. Blue sounds like an interesting character to be around. I'm glad Harley was nice to Blue and helped him out. The story kind of jumped around a lot and could use some scene development. <a href='http://tayloredcontrolsystems.com/audio-video-services.php' >http://tayloredcontrolsystems.com/audio-video-services.php</a>

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