All Comments on 'Blue-Dark Bayou Ch. 02'

by MlledeLaPlumeBleu

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
WHEW!

Oh LORD that was hot! Fabulous story.

TaffyJTaffyJover 18 years ago
Daaamn!

Sex so thick, you can smell it! Wow, I love this one. Please write more. It's so real to me, because I live in South Louisiana. Lots of swamp here, lots of dark, deep green. I feel that kind of thick heat every day, lately. It does inspire a thick, dark kind of lust, that I fought so hard as a 'good girl.' I can feel for Marie, her torment at knowing that fearful Catholic guilt. And that's exactly what happens when you take the guilt away from a good girl. Thanks for writing!

IceKittenIceKittenover 18 years ago
Dammmmm sign me up!

Loved it is not good enough for this story! Hot Dammmm! had me hooked from word one almost!! Now where is that kinda stuff in RL * ROFL* It was great really.. I loved reading your story.. Hope there are more to come!

thewordsmith2590thewordsmith2590almost 18 years ago
This incest tale positively smoulders!

A story steamier than the bayou itself, complete with some of the -hottest- dialogue I have ever read!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
More!

I wish you would write more incest stories in this style. So hot!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Amazing!!!

This story was burning hot and erotic! Your style of writing is amazing. Please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Amazing!

Superb erotica, with wonderful language and such a strong, thick atmosphere of lust and sin and pleasure. Absolutely brilliant.

rubyredrosesrubyredrosesover 10 years ago

please write a follow up! PLEASE!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Unbearably Hot!!

Exquisitely well written, almost unbearably hot. The best sibcest I've ever read, and one I will without a doubt read and reread again. It was perfect: perfect dialogue, perfect imagery, perfectly paced. Please, please, please continue writing!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
I like

Wish for more quality writing from Mlle Plume Bleu. Unrushed, riveting desire and feeling. If you have other sexy stories please consider sharing.

Especially enjoyed dialogue here and Conjure Woman. You have a rare and story telling genius. Thank you. -sharethelove

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