by gabrielleprevot
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story and I hope there is more to come. This is a great 1st story from you for Lit. Easily worth 5 stars.
I never thought I'd use that word in describing a story on Literotica. The buildup set the tone of a mystery ... drawing the reader in ... you skillfully make the reader a feel a part of the story not simply a voyeur ... the sex scene was well written and, considering the story line, quite believable.
Kudos! Can this story be continued?
Thank you both for the very nice comments! I appreciate your reading the story and am very glad you enjoyed it! I am currently working on the fourth part of the series (parts 2 and 3 are posted on Amazon but I will be putting them here in the future) and it should be ready soon. Thanks again!
The sense of realism you put into this story truly makes it golden.
I can't say enough good things about it, so I'll just say I look forward to when you post the next chapter!
I agree that this is a wonderful story and I am hungry for more.
Not many stories have had that "biting your nails as you wonder what's next" feeling as you read along! Great pace with the sexual hints as well as the non-erotic hints that lead you to the cliff hanger ending, which just makes you hope another part is posted sooner rather than later. Nice work, hope to see more!
I really like everything about this story. Very erotic.
This has been far and above, the hottest story I have ever read on this site. Thank you so much.
Thank you all so much for the kind and wonderful comments. You guys are the best! I am working on part 4 of the series now. Alexys gets some answers to the questions raised in "Blue Futanari: Transformation" and "Blue Futanari: Neophyte" (Parts 2 and 3) but she also meets another futa goddess...
Is it a chance to learn who and what she really is? What does this goddess know about Txaollix?
Can't wait to hear what everyone thinks! Thanks again. -Gabby
Such an erotic mind you have, the descriptions are beautiful. Words fail me as I try to describe the feelings you have aroused in me. Thank You.