All Comments on 'Blue Futanari: Transformation'

keep going. this is too hot.

Wonderful.

Thanks so much! Glad you are enjoying the series. There are three other chapters posted on Amazon - Neophyte, Animus, and Illusion.

How was she getting fucked and having her dick sucked at the same time. What position possibly allows for that?

I love how this story is progressing. Its not just the average tale that moves along predictable paths. The sexual parts are top notch, too. There were a few places that could have used an editor's attention, but they were generally easy to ignore because of how wrapped up I was in the story.

There are too few authors of futa stories out there and even fewer who do it well. I like where this series seems to be headed so far. Hopefully more of your work will be seen here on Lit. soon. I do hope you plan to make good things happen for Kim, though. I'd hate to see her get left behind or become simply a mere worshiper. You've got a wonderful imagination, evidenced by the shower scene, so keep it going!

Get people interested for free then charge them... Go Away.

Keep writing more plz.

OMG Gabrielle...

Your fertive imagination, picture-making writing style and your sheer sexuality simply drips from each sentence.

I thought I was good at writing until I've read these two chapters!!

I'm simply dripping with approval, need and a longing to experience the sort of things I haven't experienced before.

Wonderful :)

More please. Much more.

Rach

This is some of the best Futa/transformation stuff that I have read, and I have read just about every story, book, and manga out there in this category.

sign me up for the next expedition!

Please keep this story going. What's going to happen with Kim. Is she going to make it with the driver or her male colleagues? It kept my interest.