All Comments on 'Blues Fusion'

by Cromagnonman

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WerewolfEnthusiastWerewolfEnthusiastover 12 years ago
and the crowd goes wild...

loved it alot, story flowed real well, characters were brilliant. keep up the fantastic writing hope to read more from you in the near future.

LoneStarRiderLoneStarRiderover 12 years ago
Liked it!

Nice work. Very nice.

Sidney43Sidney43almost 12 years ago

Damn you do nice work. Liked Fee as a level headed woman who tried to do the right thing, knew she had a good man and kept things in perspective. Hew was also a good character and a good counterpoint to Fee. The rest were mere window dressing as they say.

Sam37Sam37about 10 years ago
I really liked it, yet

The ending seemed a bit anticlimactic.

fanfarefanfarealmost 10 years ago
clever invention

Cro, I gotta say how much I admire your willingness, your courage to stick your neck out as a writer and keep creating bloody clever new stories.

No one (well no one with a any brains) could accuse you of repetition and self-parody.

As has happened to a number of the popular authors on this site. Who endlessly copy themselves to feed the addictions of their core fans.

TavadelphinTavadelphinabout 9 years ago
Life is forever - fame is for a minute or two -

You made that one work perfectly -

Illustrating truisms most never see -

Nice work -

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
no romance

You posted in the romance section but it was more a story of a band rather than the romance. I love most stories by this author but this one left a lot to be desired

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I'm a pretty normal average male, chronologically well over 18 but psychologically I'm not so sure. I have been writing as a hobby for many years and now that I have time on my hands I am looking to become more professional at it. I enjoy reading, morning walks along the river...