by Cromagnonman
loved it alot, story flowed real well, characters were brilliant. keep up the fantastic writing hope to read more from you in the near future.
Damn you do nice work. Liked Fee as a level headed woman who tried to do the right thing, knew she had a good man and kept things in perspective. Hew was also a good character and a good counterpoint to Fee. The rest were mere window dressing as they say.
Cro, I gotta say how much I admire your willingness, your courage to stick your neck out as a writer and keep creating bloody clever new stories.
No one (well no one with a any brains) could accuse you of repetition and self-parody.
As has happened to a number of the popular authors on this site. Who endlessly copy themselves to feed the addictions of their core fans.
You made that one work perfectly -
Illustrating truisms most never see -
Nice work -
You posted in the romance section but it was more a story of a band rather than the romance. I love most stories by this author but this one left a lot to be desired