All Comments on 'Boat Girl'

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AverygoodlayAverygoodlayalmost 6 years ago
not fair

to stop there, I hate it when people do that, I do not like tease stories especially the ones that have held my interest which very few do

Sir GalahadSir Galahadalmost 6 years ago
It is not fair to your readers to set up a situation and then break off!

Okay, where is the next section, where Danielle loses her virginity to Doctor K and becomes his willing sex slave -- and sets up the conflict with her mother, which will lead into the third section, where the problem with Mother is resolved and the professor and the 18 year old are wed?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Language

I enjoy language as much as Dr K. Beautifully written

pepepilotpepepilotalmost 6 years ago
More

Very well written and held my attention until the let down at the ending. As the others have said, there HAS TO be a chapter 2! (and maybe a 3 and 4).

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