by StormKing33
That's really isn't my kind of story. The writing is very good but I've never been into a BDS M the meaning people are unhurting them for sexual gratification.
Again the writing is very good however the entire storyline was disgusting and I only read the 1st time for the 1st chapter.
You are destroyed however we're wonderful
I wasn’t a huge fan of the romance of chapter 3 but I love that it went back to more bdsm-related material for this chapter. I hope you continue writing because you’re pretty good with your creativity. I’d love to see Cassie and Selene in the story. Personally, seeing how all the men loved the situation the cheerleaders were in in chapter 3 I think it would be pretty hot if the dynamic spread around the world and men wanted to enslave women for themselves. But that’s my kink that I’d love to see in more stories ;)