All Comments on 'Bobby at the Cheerleader Carwash'

by StormKing33

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
don't bother

Horrible...zero imagination.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Haters gonna hate

It showed a lot of imagination, actually. I guess Anon is just trolling because he doesn't like NCR stories ... so why's he reading them?!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Good start.

C_frommnC_frommnalmost 8 years ago
Great Start

But if your not going to finish. Why start in the first place. Now that we know he and Emma have 4 kids it would be nice to Hear about the other 2 and their Fate.

mstrandprincessmstrandprincessalmost 8 years ago
WONDERFUL

Great start, love your imagination!! Keep up the great work!!

StormKing33StormKing33almost 8 years agoAuthor
Bobby & Cheerleaders Chapter 2

I thank all of you for your comments. I started the next chapter last Saturday.

Work and other other life stuff has slowed me down.

The next chapter focuses on why Emma has had such an unusual reaction to Bobby, and Sophia and Bree will also have their forced moments with Bobby.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Sophie next please!

Good start! I'm excited to read about the big breasted Sophie. Hopefully some tit fucking and definitely more anal. Good stuff.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Plz finish

Please Finish

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
I dont get the pregnancy thing

I get the idea tickles the fancy of some fetishists, but from a practical standpoint, if you only have less than two mil to live out the rest of your life on why the fuck are you going to have multiple babies by multiple women?

And how in the fuck are you going to afford it? Prenatal care is several thousand dollars per kid - one kid per whore and youve already wasted 5% of your funds - and that doesnt even count regular child care, increased food costs, the increased cost of trying to keep an ever growing family hidden - No BC and constant fucking you'll have over 15 kids in less than five years and more than 50% of your funds gone just on child care

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is honestly so disturbing. Being attracted to rape is a mental deficiency, it's not a healthy mindset.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

The cheerleader is humming a pop song? You mean she is happy with what is happening to her? Unrealistic response.

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